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Gone
its all gone
there all gone
alone
a horrible word
Nothing
is what i have
and pain is something
it stays
Not to be stolen
Bloody Roses
Black
They stare at me
with intensity
I'm going crazy
Because they're gone
every beat of my heart
tells me the same thing
and my tears
will not dry
Drowning
in pain
I'm all alone
Darkness is welcome
The shadows are my friends
but i knew they where always there
a haven for me
stained crimson red
I stare at my bloody roses
as I await death with eagerness
to see the ones that are gone
Again
its all gone
there all gone
alone
a horrible word
Nothing
is what i have
and pain is something
it stays
Not to be stolen
Bloody Roses
Black
They stare at me
with intensity
I'm going crazy
Because they're gone
every beat of my heart
tells me the same thing
and my tears
will not dry
Drowning
in pain
I'm all alone
Darkness is welcome
The shadows are my friends
but i knew they where always there
a haven for me
stained crimson red
I stare at my bloody roses
as I await death with eagerness
to see the ones that are gone
Again
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Very Good 
I noticed a few typos,, I hope you don't mind If I point them out.
Their is spelled wrong.
Also this line:
"the shadows my friend"
Should it be: "The shadows are my friends."?
Well you can keep it the original way that just bothered me. Other than that I really liked it
You are a very good writer
I noticed a few typos,, I hope you don't mind If I point them out.
Their is spelled wrong.
Also this line:
"the shadows my friend"
Should it be: "The shadows are my friends."?
Well you can keep it the original way that just bothered me. Other than that I really liked it
You are a very good writer